We was asked to create a short script or part of script so that we could see what level of script writing we are at currently.
We then got in a group and did a group reading of our scripts and gave each other feed back. Everyone liked my script and said the story flows well and that its a very well laid out script. The only things they said I needed to change were a couple of typos and also to correct one of the sentences because it didn’t make much sense.
I then highlighted and annotated these changes.